Open Poetry #14 |
To Go Back Again |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
People sometimes say Oh to live my life over again To take back that moment To relive that decision And I got to thinking What would I do differently... Would I choose a different path? Would I live a different life? And you know what I decided? I decided that no... Theres nothing I would do different... No other path I'd choose Because all the paths Ive wandered Have led me here to you... [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 06-08-2001).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey there Missouri Mamma.....I love the reasoning behind this...like everything happens for a reason...I know a lot of people think that way.....I really enjoyed reading this piece...... Too bad about the St Louis Blues and The Toronto Maple Leafs....ah well ....next year! |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
I loved this. I do also like to think there is a reason we go where we do in life, that we do chose the roads that lead home. My compliments, Paula |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I have mixed feelings on this Paula...some I miss so much...yet I have often thought those same thoughts...I would have never met the one I'm with now if I didn't move on...yet I still miss some so much...James |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Paula, I so enjoy reading you, but think of this, if we choose a different path, would we be the same person we are today, I think not, and for one, gentle smile, I like you just the way you are |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
incredible and i enjoyed it very much |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Sigh...Oh what a beautiful sentiment! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Personally, I'd change a few things...your poetry is not one of them. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love the reason.....lovely expressed. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Well hey there my sweet NB poet man...dont you think thats the way it is? Things happen for a reason? We may not see it at the time...hugs and kisses times a jillion LOL Tovi...yes....we may have a difficult walk at times....but eventually we wind up home...thanks James...oh I'm not saying there are things I dont regret...one more kiss given...one less step taken...but still I am here...hugs Logan...No I dont believe we would be...we are shaped...NOT made...but shaped by our experiences...how we choose to deal with them....heheh...and I like you too Logan.... Watersign6...thank you.... azblond...its how I feel....thank you JLR...goof...lol...thanks sweetie that means a lot Charisma...I'm glad you liked this...thanks |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Awwwww Paula, this poem is sooooo sweet it has a sigh of innocence to it that I just adore... Hugs2UmyDearPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'm one of those "everything happens for a reason" guys. We may take a wrong turn and get to a party late and regret the mistake, but if we had taken the right road we may have ben involved in an accident, There's no way to know. JFK Junior's wife would have regretted her entire life if she had made him angry some way and he called off the wedding. Instead they were married and she died.....to all there is a reason.. good writing, Madam Mizzou |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Coco...gosh its good to see you back here...thank you so much baby girl Balladeer...lol or it could be something as simple as an icq message huh? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Everything happens for a reason?" hmmm...that's just too much for my lil ole head to worry about! I say, put on some music, kick off your shoes and dance! Go ahead on "lil queenie!" Enjoyed, as always Paula! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I'll lil queenie you...hehehe...hugs you |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Perfectly said! Jenn E |
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