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Your World is falling down
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Your World is falling down |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Your world is falling down You are empty inside I can see the fear in your eyes The tears you just can't cry Your girlfriend left you For another, you must find yourself Where to turn? Where to go? What to do? Your heart is broken in two All the world can see The fight you must face The redefining of empty space Realize you are not alone What you see is not who you are I would give much Just to see a smile on your face A twinkle in you eye Something I thought I always wanted Was to see you hurt But now, the more I see of hurt The more I want of joy Go my friend, remember The love of family and friends Is behind and around you And above all, my friend Do not let on major setback Take out all of your wind One day, let me see you smile again Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It would be wonderful to have this kind of attitude toward everyone experiencing pain! Thanks for sharing! |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
loved it,great poem  |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Thanks... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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