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Make you Smile! |
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Hollowman Member
since 2001-06-01
Posts 117 |
Its that time of year you know when another year comes to pass I see the wrinkles on my brow and my eyebrows look like grass My saggy chin, my balding head, all testament to time, sit back they shout, relax and fill that glass up with wine. So older but not yet wiser my cheesy grin remains Its seen lots of emotion that smile and been through lots of pain Old duffers with coconut heads Old skifflers with pearly rinse Old with no teeth, and gums so they can only suck on mince As funny as a banana skin on road all my life I have lived in blame funny that banana skin,like a holed colostomy bag in the rain. So chins to the sky I beg you, and live a really full life there are so many fine days old men can have when off the leash from the wife Chins to the sky my fellows its never to late to try, keep it poking the clouds above and then one day you'll die. Then chins in the clouds forever and pearly rinse and gates dont worry my fellow duffers you'll never be short of mates! Rich- well I hope that makes someone sorta smile, and I am only 30! [This message has been edited by Hollowman (edited 06-06-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
LOL, this was very good, Rich. You got a smile here. Thanks for sharing this!  All writing comes |
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Hollowman Member
since 2001-06-01
Posts 117 |
Well one smile I am sure, I have to make sure I can too!! - hehehe, a good day today to write more - who knows one day I will be famous...... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
okay....okay...I admit, you made me smile too. Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yep, this poem made me smile too, for your beautiful heart always shines out in your beautiful poetry, and knowing such a beautiful friend like you brings sunshine to my heart! (sigh) You have a long life ahead of you, and you will find everything your heart desires! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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