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Traveling Back |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Back road dusty And pothole tired Another jouncing trip Through nowhere And back to Now Canopied roads Curving around my Mindless stare leave Me in awe of the beauty Hidden in open sight To those who find Abandoned relics Of rust still cling To places inhabited Once upon a time And I think of you As I try and wash The dust and rust From my mind |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
...the beauty hidden in open sight... ah yes, we often overlook that which is right before us.... well done, Sir! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Really like the feel of this one, Cpat, it's mesmerizing. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Capt Hair, Good thoughts, good words, good poem. |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
A beautiful lingering ending to this. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cpat--A wonderful metaphor here and a most enjoyable read...thank you. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Once again, beautifully done. |
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