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Open Poetry #14

poem - before

PoemCrazy
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since 2000-11-30

Posts 159

0 posted 2001-06-08 02:19 AM

before you,

i called the stars beautiful,
they held such mystery.

i heard the music of the winds,
a song you only hear if you listen.

i saw all the colors in a rainbow,
no names, but my heart knew them.

then came you.

the stars are more beautiful,
because you see them too.

the wind knows your name,
and it sings to me a little louder.

but the rainbows are a bit greener,
jealous of the color of your eyes.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2001-06-08 05:31 AM

I do love this!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-08 07:43 AM

love the last lines....

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