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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Anger churns darkly under a sparkling surface calm My eyes study the waters of emotions carefully finding no safe place to dip into without fear of being swept away by powerful undercurrents |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tovi, a wonderful entrance to Passions! Welcome, and please! check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I can feel those undercurrents building...You've expressed it very well. I look toward reading more of your work... Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-06-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions! I look forward to reading more from you. Kathleen Blake |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tovi~ A wonderfully well-done entrance to our circle of poets and friends. WELCOME ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Tovi, what a wonderful first post, welcome to all these nice folks, for being kinna a newbie myself, they are wonderful. and you express yourself not only well, but I liked seeing you can look at the situation first before leaping in. Look for more from you in the future...gentle smile |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Short and to the point! I like this.  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
short but throws powerful punches...you just found yourself a fan...post more, yup...  |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I can think of many cliches which say this very thing...but none so eloquently! Insightful, brief and haunting. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wow! Do I understand this sentiment! Well said, powerfully woven. |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
What a great piece...something we have all felt at one time or another put into such powerful prose. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Just A Man Junior Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 15Pain |
The sea like so many things alive has its mysterys and its lies careful where you swim sharks are the smallest of disasters awaiting "In daring to dream, offering life,I am sentenced to life as a Deadman walking. Such ends all Love given." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Tovi! Very emotive writing, nicely done ... I hope to read more!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Thank you so much, everyone, for such kind replies. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
great great great  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Ahh yes..the undercurrents can be the most dangerous. I love the image you present here and the way you do it. Enjoyed.. Welcome to our Passionate haven. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
So much emotions, beautifully written, welcome! |
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