Open Poetry #14 |
Tears Of The Seventh Moon |
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
~* Tears Of The Seventh Moon *~music: Elan Michaels "Ceremony Of Fires" art: Lee Bogle "Soulmates" ~www.world-wide-art.com~ ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 06-08-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) It is so very sad and heartbreaking indeed to see a world of imperialism and greed where war and hatred continues to go on! My heart cries out to all these poor natives who were forced to fight for their freedom. (sad sigh) Such a powerfully emotional poem, it's strength and cadence is remarkable! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Sharon.... You must have known this would reach the deepest corners of my heart, as my heritage is so closely interwoven into these beautiful verses. Your gift of writing has been a blessing to so many...and I know, personally, so many of your magical creations have found me wiping a tear as they etch themselves upon the walls of my heart..(ok...I'll shut up now...) And close with....this was absolutely, positively AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! Hugs, and much love to you, always, dawn (A's ~*~ D) |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Sharon.... You must have known this would reach the deepest corners of my heart, as my heritage is so closely interwoven into these beautiful verses. Your gift of writing has been a blessing to so many...and I know, personally, so many of your magical creations have found me wiping a tear as they etch themselves upon the walls of my heart..(ok...I'll shut up now...) And close with....this was absolutely, positively AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! Hugs, and much love to you, always, dawn (A's ~*~ D) |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Sharon.... You must have known this would reach the deepest corners of my heart, as my heritage is so closely interwoven into these beautiful verses. Your gift of writing has been a blessing to so many...and I know, personally, so many of your magical creations have found me wiping a tear as they etch themselves upon the walls of my heart..(ok...I'll shut up now...) And close with....this was absolutely, positively AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! Hugs, and much love to you, always, dawn (A's ~*~ D) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Mistletoe Angel: I could not agree with you more on this subject that is so close to my heart, as the First Nations peoples have taught me to live and love, and for that i thank them. Martha: Honey did you have the hiccups? Thanks you sweet angel for your lovely words. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, Sharon, again you leave me in awe at your powerful words. It can be seen, as you knew it would be..so very well done, even more so than usual...gentle smile |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Logan: I am thrilled you enjoyed it, thank you. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Absolutely beautiful! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice telling of a sad truth... have enjoyed your pstings... and the perspective |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
this touched me deeply and i love the way you weave words around a picture and tell the story with such truth and ease,the Native Americans are continuing their struggles and thats what makes me sad,you would think by now we all would have learned to get along and be open to others ideas and beliefs,etc but until everyone can open their minds and hearts and try to help others and not just benefit for themselves all the time then many people will continue to struggle.. thanks for this piece of art you have given us to enjoy.. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Oh........dear Mysteria...... so lovely.......and touching.....and true and the music has made my heart race that till now it seems unable to regain its regular beat Thank you for such beauty ************************* It's only me.......only me |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done and, sadly the last line is still true. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
ethome ~ thank you for responding our opinion means a great deal to me. CpatHair ~ I too am really enjoying your postings with your unique flair! Thank you. Watersign ~ Yes it does still go on every single day, and we just have to keep making a noise about it. Thanks for reading. My Enchanted Melody: Everytime some is forced into living a suppressed sitation there are bound to be two sides fighting for different causes, by the sounds of your heart you are on the right side of that fence, and for that I thank you! Interloper: Isn'that the truth? Thanks for enduring this long poem. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
The music was compelling as the words. Unity may not be achieved in this our life-time. Be at peace. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
The music was as compelling as the words. I'm unsure that we as a people can achieve unity and peace. Planning for war negates our quest. Be at peace. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
I'm not sure we can achieve unity or peace, as we continue to plan for war and defense. your words were as compelling as the music. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Julian: I suggest you take a big glass of water, hold your breath, and I am sure it will get rid of your comment hiccups! Try it, he he, thanks, thanks, thanks, for commenting. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ You beat the drums of my heart, as I'm sure you knew you would. 'Anger for the land his forefather’s planted overwhelmed him, Why did they have to protect what was already theirs?' Indeed ... why ? The spirits have said there will be an awakening where we will all be as one ... The resplendant land will be returned to those who cherish it ... Hearts will be made ready to accept one another in peace~ Thank you for this lovely post, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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autumn Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 44Maine |
So beautiful!!!! What a wonderful introduction to this site. I will be looking for your poetry. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Marge: Forefathers were right, the land is in fact already being reclaimed in B.C., as it should have been centuries ago. The land reclamation trials continue daily here of late, and here at least, they are getting returned what is theirs in the first place. This little thing stemmed from such a lawsuit going on right now and not only is my friend Squamish Indian, but also the lawyer for the opposition, too funny, see they don't know that! Well I laughed anyway, I thougth it was darn funny! Autumn: Welcome aboard, and I shall also look for your lovely words. |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Exceptional writing, Sharon. I am so impressed by your creative mind and ability to tell a story that touches the heart and makes one do a whole lot of thinking. Thank you so much for sharing this with me. Much love..Kate Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Kate, it is so very good to see you back! Hugs to you sweet friend, now I want to see some of that exceptional writing that only you can do of love! Welcome back! ~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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