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Logan
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0 posted 2001-06-06 09:52 PM


Ah fool, I leave you be,
for I endeavor to take a leave.
A brief spell I will be gone,
so stumble along or sing a song.
So said a note,
from my muse to me

No more flow of gentle thoughts,
all you will achieve will be for naught.
You will see I need to be,
for you to write tenderly.
So said the note
from my muse to me

Thinking of volumes of words been written,
I had to admit I was very stricken.
So with a sigh, a thought actually came,
I will cut it all down in only my name.
So blame not my muse, if it falls apart,
only three words will I impart.

A vocabulary to convey,
what I wish to say.
Simple and straight to you I bestow,
To allow you to reveal what is to know.
I love you
I treasure you
You are cherished
Be my love
I am here
Simple words?. Or the world?


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-06-06 10:27 PM


Simple words? Or the world?

your gift, the muse, has left
unfurled
your throw, the gist, a/mused
a kiss
and that you would have us see
is your muse, most splendid,
amusing we....

Wonderful!

Tovi
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2 posted 2001-06-06 10:56 PM


Much personality peeking out of this, along with humor and introspect which brings very high compliments from me.  
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3 posted 2001-06-06 11:02 PM


A different tone for you, Sweet One. I enjoyed this. It seems you are exploring more and more. Your ending simply placed a question that will not go away. Wonderful from you.

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4 posted 2001-06-06 11:03 PM


Logan~
the world

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Logan
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5 posted 2001-06-07 04:25 PM


Ahhh, Sunshine, what wonderful words back and I am glad you enjoyed my little thought here. To have you read one of mine is always gratifying...gentle smile

Tovi, your words of compliments are very rewarding from a gifted one as you...gentle smile

Ahh, Temptress, most gentle maid I am sure you will take that ending, give it that thought and answer it, with the wonderful words that flow from you...gentle smile always

Ahhh, Marge..gentle smile..yes, the world, is it not? thank you for being here, my friend of kind words


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