Open Poetry #14 |
Simple Words |
Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ah fool, I leave you be, for I endeavor to take a leave. A brief spell I will be gone, so stumble along or sing a song. So said a note, from my muse to me No more flow of gentle thoughts, all you will achieve will be for naught. You will see I need to be, for you to write tenderly. So said the note from my muse to me Thinking of volumes of words been written, I had to admit I was very stricken. So with a sigh, a thought actually came, I will cut it all down in only my name. So blame not my muse, if it falls apart, only three words will I impart. A vocabulary to convey, what I wish to say. Simple and straight to you I bestow, To allow you to reveal what is to know. I love you I treasure you You are cherished Be my love I am here Simple words?. Or the world? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Simple words? Or the world? your gift, the muse, has left unfurled your throw, the gist, a/mused a kiss and that you would have us see is your muse, most splendid, amusing we.... Wonderful! |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Much personality peeking out of this, along with humor and introspect which brings very high compliments from me. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
A different tone for you, Sweet One. I enjoyed this. It seems you are exploring more and more. Your ending simply placed a question that will not go away. Wonderful from you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ the world ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, Sunshine, what wonderful words back and I am glad you enjoyed my little thought here. To have you read one of mine is always gratifying...gentle smile Tovi, your words of compliments are very rewarding from a gifted one as you...gentle smile Ahh, Temptress, most gentle maid I am sure you will take that ending, give it that thought and answer it, with the wonderful words that flow from you...gentle smile always Ahhh, Marge..gentle smile..yes, the world, is it not? thank you for being here, my friend of kind words |
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