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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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0 posted 2001-06-06 06:02 PM


Love's Wait


Of night's long kiss I’m waiting still.

To bring in the dawn as lover's will.


How I long for your embrace.

And pray my bed you soon will grace.


Our spirits robed in love's sweet bliss.

Awaiting only our first kiss.

Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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Ed Schmidt 2001


© Copyright 2001 Mr»ÄlleÿÇät - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-06 06:19 PM


(sigh) Oh Ed, I know this feeling ever too well, I share the exact same feeling as you as I am trying to find my first (and hopefully only) love. I dream of my love every night in many fantasy landscapes and long for her eternal gift to my heart, all in that first kiss. (big hugggssss) Very soon, you will definitely find her, for you deserve this beautiful love so very much, and have total faith in you you'll find her soon, and she'll give you everything you could ever ask for! (sigh) Sooooo romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-06-16 04:50 AM


Sweet and wistful! Enjoyed.  
Fancy
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3 posted 2001-06-17 10:59 AM


...with so few words, you capture so many thoughts, feelings and wishes of a longing to be loved...your words are just a door to open up so many powerful emotions...
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2001-06-17 11:07 AM


Alley Cat,
Amen and lots of luck. Enjoyed

Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2001-06-17 01:19 PM


What lovely thoughts!  She is very lucky to have found you.  Best of luck!!  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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