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forever. . . only forever. . .
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forever. . . only forever. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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you are my moments from moon’s first light to sun’s final ray you’re the one I love each and every day steps taken together from son’s cross the floor to daughter’s down the aisle hand in hand we’ll be mile after loving mile hearts joined in love from giddy first meeting to passion’s final kiss never my heart, have I known a love quite like this souls mated in eternity from heart’s first pledge to love’s last goodbye united we’ll always be never, my love, to die love’s lessons learned hand in hand and heart to heart these ties we’ll not sever for how long my truest love? forever. . . only forever ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 06-06-2001).] |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Beautiful, so full of life and emotion. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
There is a beautiful, almost dreamlike quality to this...soothing! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
from son’s cross the floor to daughter’s down the aisle =============== What a way you have with words my friend. A beautiful tapistry of words woven in a tight, pleasing pattern. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sung at a wedding.... this is beautiful! |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
This was absolutely beautiful. Every word seems to be so perfect. It made me cry. It certainly would be beautiful sung at a wedding. Thank you for sharing this. ~Susie ~*~Born to Blossom and Bloom to Perish~*~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sven, You write about a life time of happiness that can be shared between two people if they just give it their all~ Something most of us long for... lovely writing! ~Tier |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Very romantic and beautiful! Well done! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love your lovely thoughts so tender and sweet...enjoyed it very much. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
azblond, thank you. . .  JLR, it's definitely a dream. . . thank you my friend. . . Interloper, thank you so much. . . I am humbled by your words. . . Sunshine, sung at a wedding? My friend, you give me far too much credit. . . thank you. . . Angel, thank you so much. . . Tier, indeed many of us long for something like this. . . and I envy those that have found it. . . thank you my friend. . . Romy, thank you for reading!! Charisma, I'm glad that you enjoyed my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This is real love, lucky those who experience it. This is a trully beatiful expression of loving. Thanks! |
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drussell New Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 8Baltimore, Maryland USA |
B E A U T I F U L ! I need at least three hearts for this one! [This message has been edited by drussell (edited 06-06-2001).] |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
"Forever" is a beautiful word, and especially when shared with the one you love....so romantic of you...love this... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
tender, soothing...i can only hope to experience the sheer bliss as stated in this poem... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
walker, thank you. . . and yes, they are the lucky ones. . . deborah, you flatter me my friend. . .  Thank you. . .Lauren, so glad that you loved this one. . . faterider, it's a wish that I wish for us both my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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