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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2001-06-06 12:13 PM

I wrote this a while ago. It's really a song, but I thought I'd post it anyway. *smiles*

When I call
out your name
the times I think
I'll go insane
anywhere
you'll be there
with understanding...

You reach far
into my heart
reparing places
torn apart
whenever you can
take my hand
with understanding

There'll be times
when you're gonna
need me, the way
I need you
there'll be plenty
of times, when you're
gonna plead with me
to carry you through
so lover,
hold me close
to you...
with understanding

Pick me up
when I'm down
hold me close
I'll come around
stay beside me
yes, revive me
with understanding...

understand me...

~Tier{R.T}
6/95

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-06-06 12:22 PM

Beautiful sentiment...what more could any ask than understanding.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-06-06 01:04 PM

Understanding is the foundation for commitment which is the necessary ingredient for love. Well done. I like your song.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

3 posted 2001-06-06 01:15 PM

Really nice song, love it.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-06-06 07:44 PM

you sing this song well Tier. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

5 posted 2001-06-06 08:29 PM

Ah geez, Tier, that was so lovely, I can even hear the melody, I do believe, well done...gentle smile

Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

6 posted 2001-06-06 08:42 PM

This is truly lovely, very gentle.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

7 posted 2001-06-06 10:04 PM

Nicely written, as usual, Tier...I enjoyed this! Must sound very cool with music...

sp

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

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