Open Poetry #14 |
nanna with regret |
zzz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 55 |
your partner and your trusted friend on which you always could depend his time on earth drew to an end you feel afraid,alone yet you still have your memories your mind has many galleries for you to choose when 'er you please a place for you to roam a place where he will always be waiting for you happily in each and every memory to keep you save and warm |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Gently, bittersweet thoughts... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ZZZ, Enjoyed this very much. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is a wonderful sharing of empathy...Welcome to Passions! Thank you for sharing, and please, check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done. . . full of understanding. . . welcome!! I think that you'll like it here. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
I love the way you've rhymed in this. Wonderfully done. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
zzz- what a tender and loving write.. so very beautiful. welcome to passions.. ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Very beautiful ........A complete truth |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful sharing of the heart here my friend... jwesley |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Nice heartfelt poem. Welcome to Passions! Deb |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Touching poem. Welcome to Passions, look forward to more from you. Sandra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welocme to Passions. I look forward to more of your work. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I simply had to check out someone who shares the same name as mine. Welcome to Passions!!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
very very soothing...i especially like the 'galleries' line |
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