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Hard love
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Hard love |
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Hollowman Member
since 2001-06-01
Posts 117 |
Chainsaw tongue, Robot eyes Steely grin on face Rocket thruster persona to keep me in my place Armour now in tatters heart neatly chopped in two Chainsaw tongue did its job the cutting sound of you Blender brain can't think a mixer of dreams no more rabid dog mentalitly Can I see the door! We chopped and sliced eachothers hearts my egg timer fuse finally lit Now chainsaw tongue misses me for there is air where I used to sit Yet I love her so, my chainsaw tongue as she is just like me, Blender, booster and robot eyes a perfect harmony....... Rich. -smiling?  [This message has been edited by Hollowman (edited 06-06-2001).] |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*chuckles* I like it... ~Tier |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
This is great! I love the metaphors in your poem! Lots of work went into this one I bet! Thanks for sharing, it's really very clever! Debbie |
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Hollowman Member
since 2001-06-01
Posts 117 |
- thank you all, it was fun to write,and I am glad it raised a smile or two! |
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