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Mountain Walk |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
As you walk the hills, alone and free, at this time, please, think of me. I am the breeze, caressing your frame, I am the aspen, whispering your name. I am the rock, held in your hand, strong and hard, just like the land. I am soft hidden groves, where flowers lay, nodding their heads, begging you to stay. I am the eagle, held in sharp blue skies, calling you on, with my haunting cries I am the stream, running pure and clear, the deep pools soothing, holding you dear I am the sunset, dropping over the hill, giving you peace, which lingers still. I am the stars, in black velvet night, touching your soul, holding you tight I am what I am, and only can be, where you go, and what you see. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ahh...everywhere  Wonderful writing, Logan. You are certainly growing as a poet, Sweet One! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Love this. Wonderful flow of descriptions and thoughts. Well done. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Ahhh, and there is only One Who is able to be in all those places. Enjoyed thinking of that and yet, wondering if that's WHO you meant. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely write, Logan. All writing comes |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ WOW ! How you caressed me with your verse. Very romantically written - very romantically enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
All of you are so very kind. Temptress, gentle one, thank you for those kind words, from you, I appreciate greatly...gentle smile poeminister, a well done from you makes my day, thank you Ahhh, Vas, gentle smile, is not the saying of "we are who you wish us to be" not true, I believe each message is received as we feel. Glad you enjoyed pondering over this and appreciate you reading it...gentle smile Lone Wolf, thank you for your comments, and appreciate you coming in to read it..Best to you Ahhh Marge, gentle smile, glad you felt the movement here..thank you for being here.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Personally, I believe this one deserves another go-round ! Just so very pretty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan...It is beautiful...thank you Marge for the go around. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh what a beautiful picture you have painted for me....waist high summer grass strewn with vivid wildflowers....a stream laughing in the backround...take my hand walk with me there.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now this is my idea of a place for a picnic, some wine, cheese, and time away from the world, oh, did I say I lived in such a place, he he, Logan this was T-riffic! I loved the flow, the images, and it felt like home to me at least. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
 you write so beautifully here and I always enjoy yours,this one is going into my library  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love the metaphorical phrasings of the depth of your love! Great poem! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very lovely Logan...nicely done as always ~Victoria~
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Logan, this passes over one's senses like a fine day wrapped in silver and gold... a beautiful rendering.... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely and soothing, Logan, my friend. Cor |
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theLadypoet Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 97Or USA |
 :sunshineAlways the poets whose work is without needing critique - are the ones who welcome it. The Old Ladypoet loves this one!! 12 chocolate PinWheel cookies!! theLadypoet "A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
How could I missed such a beautiful write, love the sight of you within. excellent penned. Charisma |
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JCGF Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 72MA |
What a beautiful picture you've painted for all of us. I could almost hear the wind! Very nicely done. Tammy |
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autumn Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 44Maine |
So beautiful. I felt peaceful reading it. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Glad you did Marge, because I missed it the first time. I think it's super!! Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I liked it. Unforgetable. Melton |
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