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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
See… The blue does lie On sky’s couch in Just as comely a way As the black, Which graces evening. She does not Walk the shadowed streets Enticing all who wish to Hide from eyes The ways they take Their pleasure and pain But she does With quiet seduction Bring senses to arousal And illuminate the wounds So that dressed they may be She is no less The temptress than black When against her skin she Wears diaphanous lace Of cloud which in veiled Dance she removes Exposing all I will today, Make love in her light And with eyes open See what I have only Felt in darkness |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!! WOW, I remember you from the former Papa's Poetry Circle, welcome to Passions, dear friend! Do you remember me? Wonderful debut poem, I enjoyed the voice and spirit you put into it, describing how such darkness can be replaced in love, enlightening the heart. I love it!!! Love is the joy of all life, and it is what heals us from sorrow. May true love forever flourish in your heart! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This....is wonderful! And probably a little more, but I am speechless.... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"And with eyes open See what I have only Felt in darkness" Beautiful. Wonderful write. PM |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Your poetry always blows me away! Good to see you here! and Noah, I had no idea that was you! *smiles* ~Tier |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
you grace us so, with your wonderful SHTUFF here Capt. thank you for doing so I too was especially captivated with the same stanza as PM |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well written and sensual to the core. Encore. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
But she does With quiet seduction Bring senses to arousal And illuminate the wounds So that dressed they may be Some wonderfully written images. enjoyed the read. "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Sky, clouds, the dark street & a erotic fears hint . A mystery |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cpat: "The blue does lie On sky’s couch in Just as comely a way As the black," and you have a wonderful and unique way of looking at it..much enjoyed. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . now this. . . this I liked. . . really passionate and full of fire. . . perfect for a hot July evening. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely expression...James |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
flawless in its execution...an exceptional poem.. |
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