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Only I Know
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
 Only I Know it comes to me, quiet, serene, uninterrupted, this feel, only I know as you most certainly are, sitting there, contemplating sending the thoughts trickling foreverupwardtocatch the first cloud to send to me the rains of your deliberations, it comes to me quiet ~ only I know this fullness of your contemplation write with grace, all others lose face; |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interesting form... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I'm not sure that I fully understand this, but have a very close relationship with a person and do know the fullness of her contemplation at any given time, as does she my own. Perhaps it's the many years that have created such a bond. Enjoyed this and it caused me to think. I like writing that does that. Peace Michael Proust- |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Trickling upward ... yes. Fantabulous! Yes. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"foreverupwardtocatch the first cloud to send to me the rains" Wonderful write. PM |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I like this form. It suits your style well.  All writing comes |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
there is something serene and pure about this poem. enjoyed it alot "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Like it, specially the form it's written in. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now this is definitely one that makes me go, "hmmmmm"! ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Cpat...sometimes form makes the poem...thank you... Michael...sometimes, "many years" helps...thank you... Interloper...up! indeed!.... Thank you for the wonderful, Poeminister... LoneWolf...we all have some distinct styles, thank you... Brian....pure....yes, thank you.... Thank you Titia.... Mysteria....mmmmm, good!..... |
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