Open Poetry #14 |
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Today I died |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
I feeling kinda lonely my skin is turning blue my heart has give up beating And i smell like an old shoe Today I died my heart hasn't the heart to try i've lost the will to survive Cause todays the day i died No-more lonely nights in bed plenty of time now to rest my head on this soft plush velvet red deep down in the ground Today I died my heart hasn't the heart to try i've lost the will to survive Cause todays the day i died This is the end of marriage And if it was still a working part I'd cheer with all my heart because death did us part Today I died my heart hasn't the heart to try i've lost the will to survive Cause todays the day i died No more wife to nag No more Job based Stress No more kids to murder No more life in a mess today I died i m glad i no longer have to survive I feel happy and a passing dread Im happy now im dead The very deep did rot: O Christ! |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Rest in peace. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Such a poem of sadness and despair! (big hugggssss) Oh Walter, I am so sorry your marriage didn't work out, but it's not your fault, for you have a loving heart of gold and I just know with your love you will find the woman of your dreams! I know how you feel, for just two weeks ago I've felt like a ghost too, with a boy inside of me that died. But the world continues to revolve, just as your heart keeps beating. I pray with all my heart this feeling passes and you again find love to remain with you eternally! (big hugggssss) So very sad but well-written! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
kinda hard to read this one but Death is a given for everyone so I have to say it was well written but on a subject I dont like to think about really if ya know what I mean good writing though |
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