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The Mist Of Moments
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The Mist Of Moments |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Mist Of Moments I vacillate on moments last Of times intangibility On sands that drain forever past That ghosts my host literally. Like winds that move without a trace Full sail upon dynamics would Without a base without a face Ignoring should, ignoring could. The hand of change is full of pain I cannot grasp it by the core I cannot find where it has lain Yet swirls about me evermore I’m full of doubt that will not cast The infinite of figure eight What good is date forever past? What good is fate without a sate? I cannot catch tranquility Real time is like some colors lie The true of solid quality You cannot touch a rainbows sigh. So now I watch the weaves of hue For never will a moment stay All subtle eves of green and blue And let the moments pass away. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
you write so beautifully Seymour,i love it  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I vacillate on moments last Of times intangibility On sands that drain forever past That ghosts my host literally. ============================ I’m full of doubt that will not cast The infinite of figure eight What good is date forever past? What good is fate without a sate? I cannot catch tranquility Real time is like some colors lie The true of solid quality You cannot touch a rainbows sigh. So now I watch the weaves of hue For never will a moment stay All subtle eves of green and blue And let the moments pass away. ================================== Nothing gold can stay? and AGAIN I say ... (ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis) and I must protest ... for in this poetic gift of confess You claim you cant touch a rainbows sigh yet I have seen its reflection in your wisdom's eye (tis the same gift ... that allows you to fly) *winkiewinkie*  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~  Meet me in the mist  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes, almost all things change and it is hard to catch time or satisfaction. We can, however, enjoy the moment and our memories. ~*~ right now is the time to enjoy life fulfilling recall memories ~*~ Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
the laze of eight upon it's side infinity, I would thee ride to hear forever more implore sigh's content, come to my door.... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh*.....heartfelt penned, wondering if you readed my mind before writing this beauty. love these lines Real time is like some colors lie The true of solid quality You cannot touch a rainbows sigh. Excellent piece my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Watersign6, And I love your loving it. JM, This can only be answered with a poem. Tomorrow, winkiewinkie Stinky Interloper, I try the best I can, thank you. Lady, What a wonderful invitation. *L* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, We crossed in answers. I so enjoyed your wonderful comment. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Yes, tranquility is indeed intangible, but we always hold it true in our spirits, and using such essence, we will all soar to the greatest heights and paint the world with color, now onder what moments may come. (smiles) I lost myself in the rainbow visions and mist you breathed to life, this is extraordinary! I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is indeed, a mist write....it likes me, so it follows me home.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 And I will be here... with ~Tinkerbells~ on *L*  *winkiewinkie*  |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"The hand of change is full of pain I cannot grasp it by the core I cannot find where it has lain Yet swirls about me evermore" If only we could grasp the core and start and stop change whenseover we wish. I like the thoughts and imagery. Wonderful write. Poeminister |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mistletoe, Just love to show you my heart. Sunshine, The mist will never block your sun. *L* JM, And I will tell you dreams to fly. Love Sy Poeminister, Thank you for the wonderful. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Seymour, our PoetFriend Poe nailed the verse that I too adored and I thank you for yet another excellent write from your talented pen that you have shared with us readers and needless 2say this poem I shall treasure in my library dearPoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Coco, My friend I can only say a sincere thank you. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Two words Sy: "CLASSIC LITERATURE"!! You have sculpted a masterpiece here which will require a generous serving of re-reads to truly appreciate the layers contained herein. Wonderful poem and thought-provoking. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, A flattering reply, I thank you much. |
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