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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Melodies soft as ancient drums accompanied by virgin's song in long forgotten language is your voice echoing upon my heart ~*~ As ripened mangos eaten in ecstacy beneath cool palms is the sweetness of your kiss ~*~ clear, aqua pools adorned with hibiscus honeysuckle, & spices is the refreshment of your love under stars ~*~ As rich java sliding in alternate heat & ice down delicate throat is your warm brown skin against my own... ~*~ One eternal sweep of moon in heaven's arrangement with song & melodious sound upon forever we are founded... ~*~ upon delicate wings of always, I love you... ~Tier{R.T.} 6/99 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Tier, I'm just running out of words to tell you about your writing. . . every time I read it, there's just something about it that speaks to me. . . like I've read it before. . . excellent. . .I can see the picture that you paint. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sven, thank you... it's so nice to be "heard"... *hugs* ~Tier |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tier, each could well stand on their own....but the blend is....java.....with cream.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Tiers---simply luscious...each image more rapturous than the preceding--sheer ecstacy!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tiersdin~ This is elegantly phrased ! The presentation is breathtaking~ VERY nicely done ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Bravo!! Such pictures you paint and such words you weave... enjoyed this a great deal!!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tiers, delicious images you paint. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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