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Fingertip Touches---if I understand the challenge...
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Fingertip Touches---if I understand the challenge... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
to write from that phrase, right? Fingertip Touches Virginia Salter fingertip touches that’s all he ever really meant to use yet every time he took his disciplining hand away a rainbow’s colors marked the day in agony of memory recordings of what was his ‘love’ he couldn’t shove his feelings deep they’d only creep to mind again leaving pangs of pain tears of rain horrid stains of lost control he could not cajole away © April 7, 2001 |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Aww.....so poignant....so well done. *s* Hugs On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You found an entirely different viewpoint to write from. Very good VAS Joyce |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you both, and Joyce, see what I wrote to Gentle Spirit's attempt re. my point of view taken. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed a different view of the line VAS. . . excellent. . .  if you'd like to give me another phrase to work with. . . see Hi there! to submit your idea. . . thanks!! --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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