Open Poetry #13 |
The Robe |
Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Was but just a robe ordinary homespun worn softly spoke few words stripped of His red robe ordinary homespun words echoes are still heard One who lived by deed taken up with all God speed homespun love in word |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Was but just a robe ordinary homespun worn softly spoke few words" Liked this part best Very nicely done! SEA |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
homespun worn homespun words, homespun love. Guess sometimes one has to make or do it themselfs... Great write. Bernie A a day keeps the world 'g. Bernie Slicker |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
"One who lived by deed taken up with all God speed homespun love in word" Homespun most precious. Straight from the heart. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
SEA, Bernie, Inot2B, thank you all for taking a moment out of your day to read this... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Many years ago, I read a book with this same title that touched me deeply... your poem is every bit as excellent. *S* |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is touching very spiritual |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very profound write. Nice work! All writing comes |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nicely done, Lady. Some robes are more signifigant than others.... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
His being the most significant of all...thank you all for taking time to read this.... |
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