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Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

0 posted 2001-04-07 08:32 AM

this is one of my first poems that I have wrote, but never posted it here before. Haven't wrote much in english lately as I wrote some in my own language. But well I missed you all guys.

King of the Sky

Shivering lightly, when your shadow falls over me
My heart beating quickly, and my soul must agree
Since that you were near me, I feel how smoldering fire
wakes up and starts to grow with passionate desire.

When you circle around me, majestueus while you fly
Powerful and so proudly, you are my king of the sky
I'm loosing ground when you pick me up in your flight
Loosing my fear, cause you are on my side.

I trust you completely, and lay my hand in your hand
Feel that you love me truly, know that you would understand
How my heart has been hurt, and that you will ease my pain
Please have patience with me and our love will remain.

Charisma
~*TMP*~ February 2000

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-04-07 08:45 AM

That we should all have patience of saints is indeed a worthy request...well done, Charisma. It is not easy writing in another language, and you have been making great strides.

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

2 posted 2001-04-07 08:55 AM

Charisma~ You write with the pen of the
angels...this is beautiful..the hope and
tenderness in your poetry is astounding...
each line wonven together for a breathtaking
view~

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 2001-04-07 02:13 PM

This is very beautiful Charisma....thanks for sharing!!

Nathan

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-03-24 05:51 PM

(smiles) WOW!!! Ooohhhhhh...and this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you forever walk hand in hand with your love and share the heavens forever! (kiss on cheek) I love to write in Spanish all the time too, I know how hard it must be to write in another language and you've done it so well here! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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