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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2001-04-10 09:22 PM

Windchime Dancers

Windchimes
twirl with Spring Breeze
stirred by butterfly wings
exuberant fairy dancers
celestial pirouette breath of peace
rainbow ballet of tranquil sway
heartstrings strum melody
when soft wings kiss
windchimes

~*By Melissa Honeybee*~

~ ~ ~
A rictameter is similar to a cinquain,
it consists of 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 6, 4, 2 syllable lines
the first and the last line must coincide

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 04-10-2001).]

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2001-04-10 09:25 PM

*clapping* loved this!

SEA

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2001-04-10 09:34 PM

See me?

I am standing and giving you that ovation you so deserve - fantastic job on this poem and the windchime graphic you created was perfect to set off your wonderful words. Fanbloomingtastic!

~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-04-10 10:37 PM

Melybee...so...YOU....

Wonderful!

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-04-10 11:18 PM

Sea, Mysteria and Karilea ~

You're making me blush, thank you!

Take care,
Melissa~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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5 posted 2001-04-10 11:53 PM

celestial pirouette breath of peace
rainbow ballet of tranquil sway
heartstrings strum melody
when soft wings kiss
windchimes
==============
Melis this is soooo cool....
you took the style and format and made it your own..
a very clever inspire..
wonderful imagery and presentation as well

baby, dont you work so hard for this prize you found ...
it will all be gone when you turn around ...
cuz, nothing lasts forever anyway ...

Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

6 posted 2001-04-11 12:23 PM

Great job, Melissa. Well done.

Mike

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-04-11 12:28 PM

Mellie~
A happy thought
swings on the air of you
Very merry beautifully
Chiming in celestial cadence flutter
On musical magical flight
Winged dancers of delight
Metamorphose
Mellie~

~Hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Chelsea~
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since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2001-04-11 02:20 PM

missy,

i know you adore
butterflies and this
is a wonderful style of
poetry, perfect music
to go with it too

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-03-24 05:55 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I have written a few of those rictameters too, they are so fun to write! (kiss on cheek) Your gorgeous words always laugh and sing like butterflies, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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