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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-04-06 08:52 PM



Forever Eyes (Lai)

Invading my dreams
Lost in them, it seems
Those eyes
Shine they, moon-like beams
Rise desires, teems
Deep sighs
Sewn in mind, in seams
"Forever eyes", they stream
My skies

~~~~~~~~~~~

Rainbow's End (Lai Nouveau)

Through clouds, soft gray, will rainbows wend
It's colors bright, on earth to end
Tale Told
The silken breeze, drops rain to mend
The hunger, thirst, on limbs that bend
Unfold
To natures reach, to touch, suspend
To all the living, life amend

The reds and blues and hues extend
At cease of storm, with yellows blend
Of Gold
A rainbow, raining gifts to lend
Of hues in calm, to kiss, earth send
Behold
It's colors bright, on earth to end
Through clouds, soft gray, will rainbows wend

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Our Plight (Virelai)

Silhouette of night
Whispers she, delight
In Lace
Midnight sees no fright
In eyes, that shine bright
His Face
Caressing 'til daylight
Arms surround her tight
Embrace

Giving up the chase
His, she says, with grace
Love You
Take me, your own pace
Desires rise, hearts race
Anew
Lift me to your face
Kiss me, on lips, place
Tattoo

Touched by morning dew
Wetness, lips of two
Just Right
Needing, wanting you
Morning, nighttime, too
My Knight
Seeking mind's eye view
Forever loving you
Our Plight

~~~~~~~~~~~~


~Wynter/Maureen/Moonchild


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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Denise
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1 posted 2001-04-06 09:50 PM


Very beautiful Maureen! Lovely!
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-04-07 01:04 AM


Denise thank you, this is a harder form to write in, in fact I wrote one about writing them:
The Perfect Lai

I'm playing you know
With words that should flow
And rest
Your face all aglow
As eye's follow slow
A test
Just trying to show
How perfect lais go
This quest....  

I jest

It's a form that can drive you crazy  
~Wynter/Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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