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fingertip touches (challenge phrase)
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fingertip touches (challenge phrase) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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*Thanks to Just a Woman for the phrase*  fingertip touches play against my skin like the drawing of a bow to a violin string coaxing and caressing the softest and gentlest of melodies from the depths of my wounded soul quitely, they begin trailing down the side of my face tracing the outline of my eyes, my ears, my lips the first phrases of this movment of our love in a key only known to the most intimate of lovers in time with the beating of the heart then, as the phrases develop the touches become more and more exquisite, moving me leading me down the path to where my soul joins with hers as the performer draws his bow passionately across the strings the virtuosity and fire of his interpretation propelling the listener into his realm scaling the highest notes with ease then, as the last echo of notes fade into the background the only sound that is heard is that of love and I am placed lovingly back into my case to be played again by the only performer my heart has known ------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
This is just beautiful. I could see and feel every phrase, thanks for blessing us wit this piece. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
What a lovely, lovely tribute to your love. Joyce |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
You've done this beautifully, Sven. I loved it.
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
"and I am placed lovingly back into my case to be played again by the only performer my heart has known" She should never have placed you back into the case. You should be kept out so that you can play always for us. Sir this was so eloquently written!! ENCORE ENCORE ENCORE |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, Sven, this is beautiful! SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sven, you have done another magnificent job. Well Done! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Brad, you're welcome. . . and thank you for reading. . . Joyce, thank you. . . Just a Woman, thank you for the phrase. . . and I'm honored that you loved it. . . inot2B, but didn't I tell you?? The case that she put me back into was her heart. . . . . . thank you my friend. . .SEA, thank you. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Interloper, thank you for reading my friend. . . To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah Sven, this is, I mean, WOW!! Beautiful.....Now this is one challenge I might have to get into if I am up to it!! Well done hon. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiful, and not to get corny but, brrrrrring went the strings of your heart!  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Well, I have been wary for a while now about musicians and their instruments, but I do love this, Sven. Beauty at its finest from the Sven Pen. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
awww sigh.... le bout du doigt touche, du poète romantique. ...beautiful Sven....  Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
GS, thank you. . .and your turn on the phrase was wonderful as well. . . thank you my friend. . . VAS, indeed they did. . . lol. . . thank you. . . Temptress, there's nothing wrong with us musicians. . . we're just like poets. . . . . . thank you. . .Greeneyes, ce poèt romantique est honoré pour vous avoir touché avec les bouts du doigt de ses mots. . . merci. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, this is just beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! Sauni Sauni :) |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
well a read of you never disappoints...and this one is no exception....*sighing deeply* thanks for making me remember my own fingertip touches..... and lolol I didn't even know there was a challenge and I wrote one with the challenge phrase...will post later...not sure I like it yet.... |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
this was magnificently done..thank you for sharing it lost in thought, found in words. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow! Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Saunni, thank you my friend!! Jellybeans, thank you for reading. . . actually, I asked for phrases from people for challenges and this was one of them. . . can't wait to see yours!! wandering, thank you for reading. . . Keth, I'll take that wow and raise you a WOW!! LOL ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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