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Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-04-06 09:56 AM

Come, take my hand and walk with me
Down this path past yonder trees
Feel the warmth of my skin
Let it stir you deep within
Caressing emotions hidden deep
I’ll dry the tears that you weep

All your fears will go away
Finally being kept at bay
You’ll lose yourself in my eyes
Nothing but truth, no need for lies
Open my heart and look inside
Let my love be your guide

Take me in your arms
Shelter me from all harm
With you I am free to be
The woman that I want to be
An angel in the purest form
Nevermore shall it storm

Sunshine will forever abound
From the sky to the ground
Lay with me on the beach
Where gentle waves will softly reach
Encompassing saturated lovers
Playing beneath nature’s covers

I give my all to you alone
Secluded here by surrounding stone
A sacrifice to your passion
To put an end to our transgression
Love will serve as our foundation
Along with mutual admiration

So come, my love, take my hand
Together let’s explore ecstasy’s land
Out amongst the ocean deep
Into the earth our bond will seep
Sealed forever by the oath
Of the vows we doth quoth

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-04-06 09:59 AM

LW~

I LOVE THIS!! Great writing.....

( so beautiful) SEA

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2001-04-06 10:17 AM

Great poem. Thanks for sharing this

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-04-06 10:19 AM

You know I have to add my smiles....

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

4 posted 2001-04-07 03:46 AM

Well this certainly deserves a
BUMP!!!

LW, I think this is the Best piece of work I've read
from you yet!
Absolutely wonderful and loving.
Made me feel warm and fuzy all over!

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2001-04-07 03:59 AM

This is Beautiful. Your work just seems to be getting better and better.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-04-07 05:28 AM

I agree with everyone, this is fantastic, Jennifer!!!!!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

7 posted 2001-04-07 06:49 AM

Hello there
just sneaking in, missed this place & thought I'd come & play, so sorry hon I have not emailed you for awhile, please forgive.
Well this piece is so beautiful, your words so delicate and touching, straight from the heart...loved it.
winged ~HUGS~ always floating your way
Love Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-04-07 09:32 AM

SEA - Thank you!!  Happy you liked it.

Brad - You are welcome, thanks for reading!

Sunshine - I know you do!

Irie - Wow, and thank you for the high praise.  Oooh, being warm and fuzzy is the best!!  Thanks!

Temptress - Thank you, as they say practice makes perfect!

Kathleen - Thank you, sweetheart!!

Tracie - Hello there stranger! Welcome back! I hope you sneak in more often. No need to be sorry, we'll catch up soon. Thank you very much for the comments. Glad you loved it. ~HUGS~ to you my friend.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2001-04-07 11:43 AM

enjoy

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2001-04-07 11:47 AM

LoneWolf~
A lovely, graceful piece.
Muchly enjoyed.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

11 posted 2001-04-07 01:55 PM

"Encompassing saturated lovers
Playing beneath nature’s covers"

very nice lines and brilliant poem..I really enjoyed this...peace and one love!

Nathan

Red-uni
Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 192
Georgia, USA

12 posted 2001-04-08 12:27 PM

Very well written. Good read.
Red

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

13 posted 2001-04-08 05:04 PM

vandana -

Marge - Thank you much. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Nate - Thanks for stopping by, I appreciate it.

Red-uni - Thank you and it just seems to flow.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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