Open Poetry #13 |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware ![]() |
(feeling a bit of spring whimsey ![]() Were the lights on Or off Could one hear us cough Were the doors Open or closed Did we take off our clothes Could skin Have been seen If you were on the scene Am I still loveable Are you still huggable Were we content With two bodies bent In proximity Did they then Blend with glee Meld one another free We walked in the park A sunny lark This bright sparkling day Though it is not yet May And saw scenes of spring In each living thing They met through their dogs Who were sniffing each other Others were drifting Hands from their canoe sifting While septuagenarians Just sat and held hands The birds twitterpated They not yet were mated Flying by on another Not sister or brother As bees buzzed and swarmed And the daffodils warmed By sunlight so yellow We both felt quite mellow Eventually back For warmth we did lack And found comfort inside Where you first were my bride Did we repeat that day (It still is not May) I'll give no more clue The answer's in you The first duty of love is to listen. ~ Paul Tillich ~ [This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 04-07-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Delightful whimsey, Wilfred! It does seem that in spring all kinds of fancies are kindled and everyone's in love with something or someone. Well done! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sigh...twitterpated...I love that |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
usted sabe que amo esto, y mando por favor resorte mi manera. ...as que lo no es todavía tan frío aquí y los seres de flores mas floreciendo. ...mother de 2 hace bien. ... ![]() Greeneyesß you know I love this, and please send spring my way....as it is still so cold here and the flowers are not yet blooming....mother of 2 is doing well.... ![]() Greeneyes~ *L* was in a french mood...hope all is correct...been a while *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 04-08-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
in fancy come spring bees hum a bit of whim looks good on him and poets lark about the park because it's spring because it's spring... enjoyed! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--Sweet and playful...with a bit of laughter...enjoyed this. |
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