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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-04-05 08:58 PM

she holds my heart gently
as if it were made
of the most delicate of crystal
in her hands, I am so much more
than just plain glass
the light of her love shines through me
reflecting to all those around
the brilliance of our love

she holds my heart firmly
as if it were made
of the most solid of stone
in her hands, I am so much more
then just plain stone
the strength of my love carries her
showing to all those around
the power of our love

she holds my heart
and I hold hers
together
light and strength
brilliance and power
this is our love

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-04-05 09:07 PM

this is our love...perfection in motion

You've never said it better!

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-04-05 09:37 PM

How many times do I have to tell you that you're the king of romance, huh?!!!!

LOL!

I'll never get tired of saying that, this is beautiful, ya making me swoon once more!~

Take care,
Melissa~

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

3 posted 2001-04-05 10:08 PM

Lovely, Sven!

Corinne

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

4 posted 2001-04-05 10:11 PM

she holds your heart, wow this is quite romantic.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2001-04-05 10:37 PM

Beautiful Sven........sigh...just beautiful...

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

6 posted 2001-04-06 12:37 PM

Your images here are strong ones, Sven, and lend well to the portrayal of a love, both tender and tough. Good writing, my friend.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

7 posted 2001-04-06 12:54 PM

*sighs* This is VERY romantic. Let you Love Shine...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-04-06 01:22 PM

JLR, thank you so much!!

Melissa, I guess that one more time won't hurt!! LOL Thank you my friend. . .

Corinne, thank you. . .

Rosebud, thank you for reading. . .

GS, thank you my friend. . .

Claire, thank you. . .I'm glad that you could see that. . .to show that the heart can be many things. . .

kitkat, thank you. . .I'm trying!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

9 posted 2001-04-06 05:11 PM

love.....it is.

lovely piece my friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2001-04-06 05:15 PM

You don't need to say it......

you already know....

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2001-04-06 06:34 PM

"She holds my heart gently."
Sven this is the essence of love...for no matter how much we love someone if they have not these tender feelings for us our romantic desires will become dust in the wind...James

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

12 posted 2001-04-06 07:06 PM

hold it!!!!

safely, gently, tenderly, perfectly, securely

.... very special, john....!!!
an excellent emotional description
of Love as it should be...

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

13 posted 2001-04-06 07:49 PM

And that is what love should be. Beautiful, John.

"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

14 posted 2001-04-06 09:13 PM

Charisma, it can be nothing else. . . thank you. . .

Sunshine, I believe that you're right. . . thank you my friend. . .

James, I know that you know my friend. . . we'll get there. . .

doreen, I'm holding it!!

Thank you as always. . .

Just a Woman, not just what love should be. . . what it is. . . thank you my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

15 posted 2001-04-06 09:59 PM

Romance at it's finest....a lovely write, from a poet heart....

be well

Lauren~

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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

Tennessee Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

16 posted 2001-04-06 11:13 PM

Dear sven..a taste or your poetic beauty is just what I needed tonight. Lovely piece.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

17 posted 2001-04-07 12:09 PM

liked it

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

18 posted 2001-04-07 01:00 PM

Sven~

this is so loving and tender....I enjoyed the romantic feelings held within your words

SEA

Chocolate Bandit
New Member

since 2001-04-07

Posts 5

19 posted 2001-04-07 01:44 PM

Nice, Sven.

Hope she's not clumsy.

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

20 posted 2001-04-07 01:48 PM

This piece is very beautiful Sven...brilliant writing!!

Nathan

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

21 posted 2001-04-07 03:23 PM

AD dear heart, Truly this is SO BEAUTIFUL you have an awesome gift love, thank you for this, it is outstanding.
I love it but you know I do
Wonderful love truly wonderful, and you still have my heart love, I believe you said you would keep it safe, and i cwertainly don't need it here.
Take care
           love and warm stuff
               Bubbles

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

22 posted 2001-04-07 05:30 PM

Lauren, thank you. . . with wishes that you be well yourself. . .

Angel, I'm glad that I could help. . . thank you my friend. . .

vandana, thank you my friend!!

SEA, thank you, glad that you enjoyed the feelings. . . now go forth and share them. . .

CB, only if she's got chocolate on her hands!! LOL Thank you. . .

Nate, thank you!! And thank you for reading. . .

Bubbles, now. . . you know that we've given your heart back to you because you do need it. . . it's wonderful that you were able to get some time away and grace us with your presence. . . thank you for reading love, and take care. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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