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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-04-05 12:33 PM

The Dark Sings Out

sometimes I see the moon in day
soft edges to it's white
blending into clouds and blue
so different from the night

at times like that, imagine I
what thoughts are in your mind
and just today I saw that moon
and wondered as I pined

most times I see the moon at night
so still blue-black, the sky
surrounded by the twinkling lights
a face that's seen by eye

take with me these visions to dream
to shine and lend me their glow
to brighten the dark that is in my mind
to allow my dreams to flow

last month I saw the moon, just once
a sliver of orange unique
hanging in midair so low
ran out took another peek

so thrilled was I, at the beauty of
the sky, the stars and moon
and thoughts of dreams that lay ahead
as the night sang out it's tune

take with me thoughts of warmth and sweet
of arms that hold me tight
of lips to touch, caress me where
the dark sings out tonight

~Wynter/Maureen/Moonchild

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

1 posted 2001-04-05 12:36 PM

Oh yes. This was good on so many levels...

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2001-04-05 12:39 PM

I like this

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-04-05 01:13 PM

Yes! Well done!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

4 posted 2001-04-05 01:23 PM

This is a beautiful poem Wynter...
Thank you for sharing it with us...
Hugs2uPoetFriend
~coco~

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

5 posted 2001-04-05 03:55 PM

i just loved the idea and the execution went nicely o yuh

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-04-07 04:26 PM

Wynter/MoonChild~
I love your tender-glowing offerings of the moon ...

'last month I saw the moon, just once
a sliver of orange unique
hanging in midair so low
ran out took another peek'

Me too !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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