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kneadful things (cinquain)
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kneadful things (cinquain) |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA 
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kneading a baker's touch she mixes with the chefs hoping she has enough dough for dessert "HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This reminded me of an article that I read about men thinking that women kneading dough were extremely sexy. I like it! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Kneading dough...sexy??? Don't think so, now peanut butter maybe but not dough! Thanks for commenting walker. Mike "HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
You made me hungry. However, the cinquain lives and breaths. Very good. Knead away. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Thank you JL. Mike |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
you been hanging around SEA too much..lol very nice There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Jamie...you might be right. SEA is where I first learned of cinquains. I think cinquain is French for contagious. Thanks Mike |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Well, it certainly makes me wonder what's really going on in the back room of the ol' bakery!  /:-}== |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
This was cute...and LOL at Krawdads lil face...you called this a cinquain? Something to do with the syllable count? Well its very good...and I dont think you knead peanut butter there Mike...lol although it sounds like maybe you NEED it hehehe |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Krawdad...this one could be interpreted in a few ways. I'll leave it up to you. LOL forevernbluejeans...yes, a cinquain is a syllable count of 2-4-6-8-2. The peanut butter reference goes back to another challenge I made... "My/Your love is like chunky peanut butter". Anyway, thanks for commenting and I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Mike "HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike |
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Panne447 Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 196S.A. TX |
Mike, I read this also as a play on kneading/needing - I liked it both ways - Panne |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Panne...I think on this one, the imagination can be stretched in several different directions. Glad you liked it. Mike |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mike~ I liked this very much...every winter I bake breads and goodies....there is always dough left over.....  SEA |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
SEA...then dessert is no problem for you.*S* Glad you like this one. Mike |
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