a touch...(cinquain...I'll try to stop after this one.)

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Open Poetry #13

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

0 posted 2001-04-01 04:24 PM

a touch
is all she wants...
a touch to let her know
she's alive in bed and not her
coffin

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2001-04-01 04:44 PM

You said it all!

I always enjoy your work.

We're sorry..this heart has been d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d. Should you like to hold the line we'll be glad to reconnect you..

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

2 posted 2001-04-01 04:56 PM

Thank you Temptress, I'm glad you enjoy.

Mike

Panne447
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 196
S.A. TX

3 posted 2001-04-10 05:09 PM

Wow! cool, Mike. This place moves to fast for me. Have no idea how I missed this one.
Panne

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

4 posted 2001-04-11 12:19 PM

Panne...this place does move fast. I'm way behind here myself. Glad you like this one.

Mike

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