Open Poetry #13 |
Senryu in Red |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
reach, to touch, don’t pluck, bend, to smell, fragrance sublime stroke softly her skin |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh my! Beautiful senryu! Wonderful image to match~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ditto Melissa couldn't help but think of the thorns, though, keep catching them while gardening near...ought to be more careful so I can take in just the beauty, eh? Well done! |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
sunshine, aw yes, this is beautiful |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Stunning graphic to compliment such sweet words of wisdom. Well said. All writing comes |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well, great minds work along the same scalar. I just penned something on a Rose before I read this wonderful piece. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
ok - no plucking - (difficult - not impossible) but restraint - not sure I could accomplish that ! Loved this |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
like VAS, i cant help thinking about those thorns too.... |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
moonbeam touches rose no ability to smell caressing her skin Moonstruck |
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Kay Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 70 |
I enjoyed this so much! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
purrrrrrr |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is soooooo beautiful, Karilea! Lovely! |
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