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Music on the Wind
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Music on the Wind |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Music on the Wind before cultural moves 'neath horses hooves before skylight buildings and transplanted roots seasons changed winds rearranged through lilies gilding the wind was music's flute grasses lean 'neath howling wind talking to my spirits' kin before stone and brick and people thick before other sounds there was the raw the prairie knew when the wind flew through life unbound giving nature awe passions of ancient people roar we can never go as before March roars in flight so fine music resounding leonine as spirits roam ancestral homes raw the cold wind blows only the bare trees know might the lamb be found in the prairie's sound seek thee solace that winds caress only through civilized kiss 'tho the raw is sorely missed chimes ring in the music's wind still leaves one's soul searching listen to the music's wind |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love the sound of the wind especially rain and I listened to sound effects while reading this. Thank you! Kathleen Blake |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
"The answer, my friend, is blowin' in the wind." She whispers, she howls, we need only listen. Great read, Sunshine. "The poet is the priest of the invisible." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--There is something very elemental in this poem of the magic of sound...like wind around time, you have written it well. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
passions of ancient people roar we can never go as before March roars in flight so fine music resounding leonine as spirits roam ancestral homes raw the cold wind blows only the bare trees know might the lamb be found in the prairie's sound seek thee solace that winds caress only through civilized kiss 'tho the raw is sorely missed chimes ring in the music's wind still leaves one's soul searching listen to the music's wind ================== ahhhh ... yet further proof that you are one with the sun  this is a very lovely inspire dear poetess of the plains...and a keeper. oh you speak to me in riddles |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
lovely, ms sunshiney one!! your writing gets more vivid every day.... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My friend~ You would already know that this one has blown into my heart with inspiration~ On fluted edges of the wind comes the voice of ancestral friend~ Notes held tightly in fisted glove released upon rememberance of peace and love~ Blessings from your pen - fall upon my heart. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
All answers are but spirils of the wind! Bless you sweet spirit, may you never cease to hear the love within the whispers of the wind, for therein lies the answers! Oh! Did I say I loved this? |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
YOU are the music |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sunshine, I knew from the title this was going to be beautiful and I was not mistaken wonderfully written, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this poem has a musical sound to it while you read.......made me feel as though I should be outside while reading. This is great!  SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I can't add anything more to the replies other than bowing low in humble praise before you the "M.E." *S* |
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duke Junior Member
since 2001-03-26
Posts 12 |
Lovely imagery, Rhyming was great . I really liked this one Well done. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Sunshine, this is just awesome! I could close my eyes and see every line. Just lovely. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I would like to thank you all for enjoying this piece along with me....who knows what will come from an early morning piece... and your replies were awesome. Thank you! |
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