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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-04-05 09:43 AM

Foggy, foggy morn
In gray light, one stands forlorn
Seeking light of sun

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-04-05 09:45 AM

Well, I'm waiting for some rain that's due here tomorrow!!

I like the fog......and I liked this one too!

SEA

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-04-05 11:47 AM

Wonderful haiku, very true for many~

Take care,
Melissa~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-04-05 11:53 AM

perfect painting, filled with longing

the morning hear has just a bit of chill with cloudless sky, leafing out trees and pink-blossomed beauties. Hope you see the same soon.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-05 12:27 PM

These haiku are awesome!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

5 posted 2001-04-05 12:31 PM

and may you find the rays of the sun to light
your heart with peace~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-04-05 01:18 PM

In gray light, one stands forlorn
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Well done! Come into the sunshine.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

7 posted 2001-04-05 01:25 PM

Absolutely NO ONE does these 3 liners better than you - (btw - I'm with SEA too - at least to say I like walking in the fog hand-in-hand as well )

The Lonely Stranger
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since 1999-06-18

Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA

8 posted 2001-04-05 01:34 PM

I am rarely moved to comment on Haiku, I guess it's me and my limited understanding of the style. This one however, jumped out and grabbed me. Wonderful !

No one ever listened themselves into trouble.

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

9 posted 2001-04-24 11:03 AM

i can certainly imagine myself in this position

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2001-04-24 11:08 AM

like this

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