Open Poetry #13 |
A Distant Dance |
KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
three million light years away far above, in another galaxy Andromeda stars. a whirling waltz in cobalt blue far below, on the earth autumn leaves dance in the wind. {Abstract Renka} |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful contrast! Makes a poet's thoughts wander through the beauty of both. I love that format and you've written a good delivery! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Koko I enjoyed this very much...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KoKo~ Delightful visuals jump to mind with this lovely write. Nicely done, poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Koko - got your poet's brush out in full colors and the image was fabulous! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
ooooh it's breathtaking and full of imagery! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I LOVE THIS...a keeper.... Greeneyes~ **** "Within you I lose myself |
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