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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-04-05 09:28 AM

Morning will come, that much is proven true
Though the night is endless when all alone
For time itself never shall misconstrue
That which Heaven can no longer condone
If it falls amongst love and mortal men
A happier place this would surely be
Of love immortal and love without end
And my love becoming a boundless sea

These things speak of what may come to pass
Yet existed beside me all the while
For in your arms, a Heaven that will last
And a reason to be, within your smile
Fully my heart will be on such display
Now I know that Heaven is on the way

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-04-05 09:29 AM

You take this from a quiet sadness to a fulfilling happiness...

well done, Sir.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

2 posted 2001-04-05 09:31 AM

so romantic, heavenly indeed!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-04-05 09:32 AM

Tugging at my heart this morning......*sigh*........beautiful...

SEA

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-04-05 10:20 AM

Your heart on display?

Any more would be overwhelming!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-04-05 10:30 AM

Proven truths....you do this very well!

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

6 posted 2001-04-05 12:00 PM

PK~ This is so very beautiful...the images
that you have woven paint a breathtaking
vision~

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-04-05 12:23 PM

Romantic and beautiful. Makes me want to sigh after reading it. Lovely thoughts.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

8 posted 2001-04-05 04:18 PM

real cool made me smile o yuh

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

9 posted 2001-04-05 04:26 PM

Great poem!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

10 posted 2001-04-05 04:49 PM

Morning will come, that much is proven true
Though the night is endless when all alone
For time itself never shall misconstrue
That which Heaven can no longer condone
==============================
If it falls amongst love and mortal men

Of love immortal and love without end
=========================

These things speak of what may come to pass
Yet existed beside me all the while
========================
Fully my heart will be on such display
Now I know that Heaven is on the way
======================
one of your best ...one of my favs
cadence kissed display of poetic heart
beautiful ethereal phrases and imagery
some things are worth falling from grace for

It's such a clever innocence with which you show myself to me
As if you know how it feels to never be who you wanted to be
~jackson browne~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2001-04-05 05:35 PM

Yes, kingdom come.

Well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2001-04-06 01:32 PM

For in your arms, a Heaven that will last
And a reason to be, within your smile

Having spent too many endless nights all alone, I love the hope in your second verse. *S* This is great!

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

13 posted 2001-05-16 07:36 PM

Glad I found this. Beautiful.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

14 posted 2001-05-17 12:01 PM

I thought this was so very beautiful and heartwarming. Thank you.....Sue

Suetang

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

15 posted 2001-05-17 12:07 PM

there is a lot of depth in this one, a lot of depth

Kathleen

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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