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KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-04-05 03:26 AM

Volcano Goddess
explosive molten fury
Coursing through her veins
Passionate kiss to the sea
Black lava tresses flowing

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
Please Visit my new web-page http://www.koko-stewart-koomoa.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/190111

[This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 04-05-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-04-05 05:23 AM

This is lovely, someday I'm going to visit Hawaii!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2001-04-06 02:16 AM

How could I have missed this? This was stunning, and the artwork was not bad either!

~*~ I write, therefore I am ~*~

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2001-04-06 10:22 AM

Awe such a gem in a small package

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2001-04-06 04:33 PM

Wow!!!!

Take care,
Melissa~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-04-06 05:08 PM

What a beautiful blending of words and graphics....not too much of one or the other....perfect!

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2001-04-06 05:28 PM

love this tanka......great one KoKo

((hugs))
Charisma

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

7 posted 2001-04-06 07:07 PM

thanks to all for your comments! I appreciate you!

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
Please Visit my new web-page
http://www.koko-stewart-koomoa.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/190111

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-04-07 06:06 AM

This is nice Koko...James

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2001-04-07 04:55 PM

KoKo~
Oh my !
Exquisite Tanka !
Your talent flows endlessly through this form.
Wonderfully done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2001-04-07 05:53 PM

ohh I like this Koko... very nicely done

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

11 posted 2001-04-07 06:31 PM

Thank you so much I do enjoy the haiku and tanka forms a lot...my favs..but i also enjoy trying to accomplish in all forms of poetry. I sure do appreciate your feedback and comments! one and all!

Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
Please Visit my new web-page
http://www.koko-stewart-koomoa.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/190111

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2001-04-08 02:38 AM

awww my friend, your island is beautiful....be well always...

Lauren~

***

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

13 posted 2001-04-08 04:12 AM

Koko
AWESOME!!!
great little write
~HUGS~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

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