Open Poetry #13 |
Crystalline Rainbows [Martie, come play!] |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Crystalline Rainbows the day is right, oh, so right for I have passed beyond the night, where dreams led me to doorways blind, and when I opened I found in time crystalline rainbows in my mind to reach and touch in dreamscape air, there is no feel, they’re just hanging there, bright and brilliant beyond compare crystalline rainbows in the air but in this day, in warm and sun, I can relive the dream that’s done, and with a hose and water, combine crystalline rainbows from dream so fine can’t be done in morning’s sun, and not even best at noon, but late in day when the sun sends its rays on a certain bent, now soon! I shall stand, green hose in hand my thumb over nozzle just so, and spray in the air water’s beads in such great flair that crystalline rainbows will show to the neighbors I’m watering my lawn, or spraying the birds on wing, little do they know, just so that I am soft, hearing crystalline rainbows sing |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
and with you holding the hose, there is definitely gold at the end of that rainbow LOL! love it! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
what else is seen in that spray?? wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I got my watergun...can I play? Oh this was simply precious, and do I ever remember the water fights we had as kids. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--it is so cold and rainy here...no sun to make rainbows with...not yet anyway...I sure played with you in my mind though, my friend....and you got drenched. Thanks for inviting me into your imagination. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you do know how cool this is ..right? well you should. |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Rainbow is my favorite color and you made it shine brite! I loved the imagery and the format that made me wait for the next word. Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Make your own rainbows. That's the spirit. Joyce |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
you see the beauty in the little everythings... what a talent. lovely words...two thumbs up. fine holiday fun. You gotta love livin, cause dyin's a pain in the ass. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ SO FUN ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I have BALLOONS...can I play too? |
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