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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
where i’ve been touched something still shines... your gentle hands and fingers... yet they pressed so far beyond the granite residue that lifetimes leave behind tonight, by this window moonlight falling through thoughts of you i feel your touch... and skin opens its pores pulling me deep inside where light from up above seems but a shadow on a strange beautiful glimmering |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is lovely - with such gentle flow..it all fits together well.. enjoyed reading..  K |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
thanks Severn, for taking time to read and comment...glad you enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TradeWind~ This is BEAUTIFUL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
TradeWind, Nice write, enjoyed the read. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Super writing, especially the last stanza.  All writing comes |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
Marge, thanks so much, a real compliment coming from you Seymour, thanks for taking time to read Lone Wolf, thank you, i appreciate the kind words, glad you enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
TW, this is a lovely write, thank you.... |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
Sunshine, thank you, glad you enjoyed this one! |
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