Open Poetry #13 |
We Should Be |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
We should be dancing Drifting on the summer breeze Hearts beating as one |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I like this, short and sweet! Kathleen Blake |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ah romancing and dancing...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So Paula...why aren't we? well done! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Nicely done, as usual, Paula! I like this! sp to be with you... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, it sounds like a lovely idea Paula! Nicely written, loved the thoughts! Best wishes, /Kit |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Dancing, with the gulf breeze, here... opps it's still cold up there, ok the summer breeze... no better yet, We should be dancing Drifting on the summer breeze ..and...... Bernie A a day keeps the world 'G Bernie Slicker |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Reminds me of the BeeGees 'We should be dancin...yyyeeaaahhh'! Ha! Hate disco. Love you and your words, however short. And yes, you should be...dancing. Shouldn't we all? |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Kathleen...LOL its seems to be the only way I can write lately...thanks James...simple pleasure yes? HUGS Karilea...no dance partner I guess...lol...thanks sp...you flatter me...thanks Kit...I love to dance out under the sky...thank you Bernie...and? and? cmon now you cant leave me hanging like this... JLR...yes we should..to the sweetest melody...thanks darlin girl |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
We should be floating on a summer breeze and drinking lemonade and laughing at the sun the moon and the stars and talking about the special times, times that last forever throughout the good and the bad....times etched in the pages of the mind with images so real to recall and drift away into the oblivion of happiness. Those times when life's special waters are crystal clear and fresh for the drinking! Ah those times....see what you've done here now! You just got me going! Good writing Paula! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ethome...but sweet poet...I adore it when you go on and on...and to know I can touch you like this? Just makes my day...thank you sweetheart |
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