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Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

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By the sea

0 posted 2001-04-04 06:52 PM

Michael Weeps

Michael weeps
and falls into
despair.

Abandoned
to the
silent nights
of
lonely starlit canopies.

His voice cries out
and yet
it is not heard.

His solitude
unbroken
by a
single spoken word.

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-04-04 06:54 PM

this is so sad.....I hope all is ok...

hugs anyway

SEA

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

2 posted 2001-04-04 06:58 PM

here's a word for you..... (((((hugs)))))

and it's parenthetical, to boot!!!

weep not, today,
sweet gentle man
please do not cry
in grains of sand...
your verse shows you
inside of you
and it is true
some understand....

* s m i l e *

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2001-04-04 07:00 PM

so sad but very well written.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2001-04-04 07:19 PM

Michael...the brevity and the words you chose, underline the message of sadness and aloneness that I feel in this poem....that makes it a good poem. Big hugs to you, my friend.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-04-04 07:37 PM

don't cry (((hug)))

elizabeth anne
Member

since 2001-03-29

Posts 83

6 posted 2001-04-04 08:14 PM

Michael,

So sad and lonely...my thoughts go to you.

Elizabeth Anne

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2001-04-04 08:39 PM

Peace my friend, hugs to you....

Lauren~

***

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

8 posted 2001-04-04 10:57 PM

Awwwwwwwww...

this is one is not to be critiqued - it's just pure emotion...

(((Hugs)))

K

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-04-04 11:22 PM

Such loneliness leaps from the page here. Hang in there, Michael and keep writing. It always helps.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

10 posted 2001-04-04 11:38 PM

Michael, So sad did this made me feel and it was so obvious that you were hurting. I hope you have enough people around you to let you know what a lovely, kind person you are. I feel very privileged to have met you.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

11 posted 2001-04-05 07:20 PM

Thank you all for the hugs and encouragement. Seriously, I'm fine. The past eleven months have not been good ones for me and I guess I just let it get me a little down. I sincerely appreciate your kindness.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

12 posted 2001-05-14 05:05 PM

So quietly wrenching....

from such a heart springs a poet, indeed....

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

13 posted 2001-05-14 05:35 PM

Decaflame,

Thank you for your kind words. This is an older poem and my mood is that of healing now.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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