Open Poetry #13 |
American Golgatha |
Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Blasphemy runs like blood over a plastic crucifix onto Swaggert's secret stash of Hustlers "I have sinned: yet belittle the sheep for following the shepard alterboys in father Brian's "private" chambers paying penance for lost innosense as the staue of Jesus drips another tear of blood before crashing on the floor below unheard beneath the droning noise of mindless ritual except the old mexican Janitor who cleans up the pieces and puts up a new one in its place walking away cursing in spanish about cheap Japanese sacred merchandise. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Not sure about this one, but the ending made me laugh...if it wasn't supposed to, I'm so sorry SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a creative mind ... Let's see some more... Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
lol its a satirical look at the hypocrisy is the church today, so laughing would be fine Thanks! |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Brad, You cleverly expressed that hypcrisy well...with tongue in cheek humor..hehe..I enjoyed it..but then I have that Scottish sarcastic sense of humor. hehehe good job! Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm so glad I didn't make you mad..... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this one...James |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
This is a great place. I have to warn you that my poems can be strange from time to time. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Brad...welcome to Passions... I have been treating myself to several samplings of your work, and you write with a fresh and creative style... and write well on many subject and themes. I enjoyed the wit and sarcastic edge to this. nice to have you here with us, your enthusiasim for poetry is evident in your replies as well It's such a clever innocence with which you show myself to me |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Heh. Hypocrisy - it's in most every facet of life - and organised religion is no exception.. well done K All obscurity starts with a danger: |
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