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Open Poetry #13
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Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
0 posted 2001-04-04 05:22 PM

I read
stunned by the words
oh, untalented me
wishing I could write half that well
I try

~*~

Oh SEA
shining in verse
words conjure ebb and flow
taking us on a wild, tossed ride
SEA shines

~*~

Sunshine
warming us all
with meter, verse, and rhyme
paints vivid pictures with her words
Angel

~*~

Coco
speaks of lost love
of the heartache and pain
rips heart from chest then heals the wound
loved one

~*~

Kathleen
oh sweet colleen
your heartfelt writing reigns
filled with love won and lost anon
tears flow

~*~

I write
my words are read
and comments made herein
by very talented people
I love

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.
© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-04-04 05:24 PM

Thank you, kind sir...............

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee
SEA
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with you
2 posted 2001-04-04 05:57 PM

My friend
~ Interloper ~
such a sweetheart you are
your talent pours from heart to screen
Love ya



~SEA~

If I let you into my heart.....
will you promise to stay?
~Sue~
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2001-04-04 05:58 PM

Oh, my....

library....
Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20
Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan
4 posted 2001-04-04 07:10 PM

Interloper, you have penned true verse of many greats in this site.  You are in wonderful company.  Thanks for sharing.  ME
Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-04-04 07:38 PM

into the library

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee
Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2001-04-05 11:02 AM

I'm glad you all got to see it.  All except Coco ... Coco, get the vibes and read me.

Love ya all.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.
Coco
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since 2001-01-28
Posts 48
7 posted 2001-04-25 01:28 AM

Interloper,
Your verse is so sweet
Like our friends state above
I too am deeply touched
By the poetry you've shared here
Hugs2UalwaysPoetFriend
coco



[This message has been edited by Coco (edited 04-25-2001).]
Waseem Cheema
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Pakistan
8 posted 2001-04-25 04:55 AM

thanx..........
BrightStar
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since 2001-04-08
Posts 219
9 posted 2001-04-25 05:29 PM

Lucky people
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