Open Poetry #13 |
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Wiggle |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Bring on an inward wiggle, tighten muscles to the tinniest squiggle, then when weakness starts it's niggle, extend those limits to extensions trickle; Only a plain same remains to blame, banning every inventive fame, reaching to frustrations pickle, then backing away extremely fickle; need need needling needing tickles; Play filled burst's of extra zest, reaching shares with future quest's, additions above historic test's to new solution's & their brief rests; Faster than the flow, steadier than the heart, imaginations kind, brings worries to depart, while they drift away, & kindness starts to stay, then is time to shake, whip up, build, create, idea's substance, structure, stance's, stemmed from love, & life enhances. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I absoutely loved this, particularly the last stanza, just wonderful! |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Not sure I understood, but a lively read. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Nicely done, craig. Cool rhyme scheme. ![]() All writing comes |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
hellllooooooooo craig I looked for you and found you in here ..hiding among the words ....nice to see you |
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