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Open Poetry #13
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Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25
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California, USA
0 posted 2001-04-04 01:33 AM

stardust cascading
slowly, teasing...heaven waits
behind a veil
© Copyright 2001 Mike Powers - All Rights Reserved
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
1 posted 2001-04-04 01:58 AM

Beautifully descriptive!  Well done!
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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2 posted 2001-04-04 04:46 AM

How lovely!
Panne447
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since 2001-04-03
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S.A. TX
3 posted 2001-04-04 07:39 AM

Hi Mike, I like this. Ditto above comments. Panne
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2001-04-04 11:43 AM

A keeper....thank you!
jfreak
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since 1999-06-17
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5 posted 2001-04-04 11:46 AM

Packrat,

Dude the best things usually come in small packages and the best things said usually are in the fewest words.  Good job here.

J~
Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25
Posts 632
California, USA
6 posted 2001-04-04 03:10 PM

VAS...thank you.

Irish Rose...thank you.

Panne...ditto the above (lol)

Sunshine...I'm keeping it too, thank you.

jfreak...Dooood, thanks and glad you liked it.
Mike
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