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Paradise Mine
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Paradise Mine |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Paradise Mine I like early summer morning best the air is cool and people at rest sneaking a few moments to start my day much too short, then again on my way all around is lush and green it's not as quiet as it might seem the birds sing a concert just for me I search for them so wild and free the sun feels warm, the sky so blue colors brilliant, things look new no dry place to find a seat dew on grass, wash my feet I walk through this paradise mine take in each moment with this wonderful find when I am here, I make time pass slow but still too fast, for I must go must hurry now it's getting late butterflies flutter as I close the gate as I leave this eden, there is no sorrow for morning light will bring me back tomorrow |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'd love to hear more about this Eden, it's lovely Kathleen Blake |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is beautiful, Helen. Full of enjoyment of the now and the promise of hope of renewal. I liked this one very much!  |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
h, Oh, I'd love to take this walk!!! I can feel the dew now . . . Thanks, Lady, enjoyed this. Well done! e /:-}== |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Although i like late evening in autumn best, i can relate to this and feel your enjoyment of spring mornings. |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
I like the spring mornings toooooooo... Bernie a a day keeps the world 'gBernie Slicker |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very cool poem! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I love early morning...just before dawn, when you can listen as everything awakes... good write, my friend... jwesley |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Can not wait till Sat.and Sunday morning when we start taking this walk together again (or while sitting in our rocking chairs on the front porch)... Bernie a a day keeps the world 'GBernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 04-04-2001).] |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, what a lovely paradise.....a very lovely write! Nathan |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
the birds sing a concert just for me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ and you have just composed a concert for us. Well Done! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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