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Open Poetry #13

lighten up

JamesBowie
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since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2001-04-03 11:12 PM

lighten up
or to soon
you might be
tasting the tears
of angels

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 2001-04-03 11:27 PM

"tasting the tears of angels..."

oh james.... i am SO happy to see you here... you ARE a poet.... this is wonderfully succinct and so very special in imagery......very good!!!!! my friend

JamesBowie
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since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

2 posted 2001-04-03 11:38 PM

thanks doreen, You too. I just wanted to say thank you for reading my stuff now and then, it encourages me. J

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 2001-04-04 12:10 PM

I agree, James, that angel tears is a very descriptive image...nicely worded.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2001-04-05 11:13 AM

Great advice and wonderful poem...gonna try to live this one today!

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-04-05 11:18 AM

I love your style, James.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-04-05 11:38 AM

Much truth....

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