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Open Poetry #13

a dead dog's bite

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-04-03 08:07 PM

I promise you--
there's something wrong...
a bouncing ball
in sing-along...
she complains of being fluff,
HR, HR---PUFF-N-STUFF!

Where I go?
THERE SHE IS.
a game--you see?
All showbiz.

No feeling and
all love's retard
consistently
in disregard.

Oh something's wrong...
if you can't see?
Then there is something
wrong with ME.
An offering
of friendship's might
withdrawn now from
a dead dog's bite.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2001-04-03 08:09 PM

Cute my friend...neeeeeeded a chuckle...

jwesley

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2001-04-03 08:11 PM

But a dead dog can't bite.........

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-03 08:13 PM

harpo... i recently wrote a poem entitled "fluff", so believe me i KNOW about fluff and that's one thing that you aren't and never will be and nor is your writing any kind of fluffy empty stuff.... but that's just my opinion for what it's worth and some people may consider my opinion fluff and to THEM??? i say!!!! pppppptuuuuuiiiii!!!! LOL

as always, your writing hits hard, girl.... (where's the paradepanties, btw? *wink*.... still laughing at the ads from attorney's saying "don't take the test, call us first" and "this is illegal here but so is such-in-such illegal in amsterdam"... ROFL) prepare the body bags.... we're on our way!!!!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-04-03 08:34 PM

can I say I didn't understand this without hurting your feelings? I tried, I just didn't get it; but sometimes I'm dense!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

thecraig
Member

since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

5 posted 2001-04-04 02:24 AM

Grueusomely sneaky. Imaginitive.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

6 posted 2001-04-04 03:22 AM

Nice work, O serene one...

regards,
sudhir

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