Open Poetry #13 |
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Don't You Say You Want A Hero |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Don’t you say you want a hero Don’t you say you want a home Those words were spoken last by Nero As he watched the flames of Rome Don’t you say your heart is burning And your tears they taste like rain Can’t you see I’m only learning Trying to cope with my own pain I know I should be better than this I know I should be better Last night lies hidden in the bliss I know I should be better Here I stand like a broken Butterfly A moth that touched the burning light You held me again and taught me how to fly Help me paint my wings tonight A life can be a long and weary road We can walk but please don’t fake it Together we can struggle with our load Together we can make it I know I should be better than this I know I should be better Last night lies hidden in the bliss I know I should be better Don’t you say you want a hero Don’t you say you want a home Those words were spoken last by Nero As he watched the flames of Rome Hi folks.......the above are lyrics to a new song of mine.......if you would like to hear the musical version.....just click on the link below. Thanx and stay warm Jon http://www.besonic.com/WWW_Besonic_com_Bluefrogmusic [This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 03-30-2001).] |
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Here I stand like a broken Butterfly A moth that touched the burning light You held me again and taught me how to fly Help me paint my wings tonight" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jon, this is amazing...really....excellent ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jon, I like this! Something about the painted wings really comes through.... |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx Sea and Sunshine..........I really do value your opinion......Thanx again. Jon |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Wow ~ I completely enjoyed this, Jon. Thanks for the link to the song. The arrangement and vocals certainly captivate the contemplative theme of the lyrics. Very nicely done. (o: Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
jon! i'm so glad to see you posting! (i've been "gone" lately..so maybe youve been posting a lot [?] and i've missed it?? !) i do so love the butterfly stanza.. ![]() again..good to see you here.. !! ![]() hugs, g where am i...WHOA! and what am i doing in this handbasket!?! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great lyrics, Jon! I wonder if it sounds anything like it does in my head. Maybe someday these music links will work for me. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx everyone for your reading.....and your comments........keep trying Denise.....one day......nice to hear from you DGV.......time permits ......I'll be back but I don't know when. See yer all Jon |
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