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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-03 05:19 PM

~*~
I leave for a while
new poets arrive and write
I miss some old friends
~*~
My juices still flow
I have not yet forgotten
my pen is rusty
~*~
Vocabulary
come from within the darkness
prick writing spirit
~*~
Stretch my mind again
spirit of meter and rhyme
let words flow freely
~*~
command discipline
demand cogent thought again
lead me back to home
~*~

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-04-03 08:52 PM

And we are all on this same path. I have been stuck lately too. Keep writing..
Sandra

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-04-03 10:52 PM

Just keep practicing, you'll get there in no time!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-04-04 12:16 PM

Pen on - I am new - nice to meet you and I will watch for your writing.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-04-04 08:34 AM

quill on my poet
clean thy pen of rust, dried ink
let it flow again

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 04-04-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-04-04 09:05 AM

These are great, it's so nice to come in here and see your name......

SEA

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-04-04 01:46 PM

Catalina Moon ~ Thanks for the support.

Lone Wolf ~ You too

Mysteria ~ Welcome. You would do better reading Sunshine and SEA than my poor attempts.

Sunshine ~ Thank you for your wonderful response, proving once again that you are the Queen.

SEA ~ The feeling is mutual, I assure you. I have a VERY special place in my heart for you and Sunshine.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

7 posted 2001-04-07 06:31 PM

would you like some wd40, though it doesn't look like you need any,, no rust here at all. magnificent poem.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-04-07 06:57 PM

InterLoper~

Do not still thy quill
Dip it in the ink of think
Thoughts will be set free
Set it on parchment so fine
Calligraphic thoughts will flow

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2001-04-07 06:57 PM

Oh I think you are home..and not too rusty at that..*s

~Wynter

* nice series of senryu's by the way

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 04-07-2001).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

10 posted 2001-04-08 02:41 AM

Rosebud ~ Thanx for the kind comments.

Marge ~ I think the ink is thinning and the quill is sharpened.

nakdthoughts ` You are too kind.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

11 posted 2001-04-08 11:48 PM

You are good. Not bad.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2001-04-11 04:29 PM

While I miss those who are absent, I welcome those who return. *S* I enjoyed this very much... your pen is obviously NOT rusty. *G*

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 04-11-2001).]

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